So, going over some of the suggestions, one of my main questions is what's the point of a
species page? I obviously get why you need one, describing the species appearance at the very least. But looking at the
dàqínrén and the
grawla pages, they're very different in how they handle this. Kinda want to know what the guideline/standard is before I start moving stuff around, so I don't have to keep doing it every time I do an edit. XD
I specifically addressed the book lung/02 problem in the evolutionary background. '
Theradectans owe their size to the light gravity, high levels of oxygen, and their
heartstones of their homeworld Atos, which allows the relatively weak joints of their exoskeleton to be able to hold their weight and their relatively inefficient book lungs to provide oxygen to their bodies. Even with these variables supporting them, the primitive Theradectan had to worry about falling from any significant (10+ ft) height, quick-starting forest and prairie fires from the high oxygen level of their atmosphere...'
I'll think over the exoskeleton stuff, cause they do move around by pumping blood around, so I think there has to be some kind of flexibility for the hydraulics to work.
Tech-wise, really depends on how their
magic works, to be honest. My main play things I want to write about are the kind of space infrastructure you'd build when you're a carnivore species that needs a lot of room for your 'cattle' and their feed. And big ships with magic space lasers.